Den stora och enda tråden om Sumialics sångtexter

[sumialic]

Med Kolozzeum som andra hem skapar jag följande tråd i hopp om att finna en större motivation och hamna på rätt spår i livet.

Jag har sysslat med musik ungefär lika länge som jag har tränat - i 13 år. Det har dock varit till och från där från dessvärre har varit en sorgligt stor del.

Som ensamvarg har jag alltid haft inställningen att vem som helst kan göra vad som helst. Det har funkat för allt i livet utom musiken som är så långt utanför min bekvämlighetszon att självförtroendet gång på gång har svikit.

Jag har tidigare släppt ett album (4 år sedan) och efter mycket om och men jobbar jag nu på ett nytt. Samma berg och dalbana som vanligt dock.

I denna tråden tänkte jag dela med mig av mina låttexter. Jag är så långt ifrån en ryggdunkare man kan komma, men just när det kommer till musiken är positiv energi från andra antagligen något jag behöver.

Nu är det dock inte meningen att vi ska ljuga i tråden. Är något skit så är det skit. Jag är en grymt ärlig person och förväntar mig detsamma av andra. Även om det svider tas konstruktiv kritik emot med öppna armar.

Engelska är inte mitt modersmål. Jag upptäcker själv ibland att saker jag skrivit inte funkar och måste ändra. Det kan hända att sådana fel förekommer och det får gärna påpekas. Oavsett kommer jag innan jag spelar in låta någon som har engelska som modersmål korrekturläsa. Nämnas ska även att kommatecken inte förekommer som grammatiskt korrekt, men som stöd för hur texten flyter. Ett komma är en paus helt enkelt.

Jag håller tummarna att ni inte kommer sova helt på denna tråden. Första låttexten kommer i nästa inlägg.

Är det förresten något som inte kopplas eller om ni har några andra frågor så bara shoot.

[sumialic]

The unwanted visit

Intro:

*Humming on chorus in background*
*Doorbell*
Just a second, be right there
*Bang, bang, bang*
I'm coming, I'm coming, relax, jeez
*Door opening*
Oh, it's you
What the hell do you want?
No, I don't want to hear you out
Please just leave, please just leave

Verse 1:

Please, leave, I can't believe I have to sit this through
You're making me suffer and you agreed that we should quit it too
Seeing each other you had to do it again didn't you?
Come to my home even though you know I have forbidden you

Remember last time I laughed at your acts and had you ridiculed?
And yet you're back, how the hell do I get rid of you?
You're not supposed to be here, I know that we've been tight
But that relationship has sailed, you know the reasons why

You weren't treating me nice and we couldn't go without fight
You're such a mess I guess obsessed with blowing smoke behind my eyes
I couldn't care less if you meant it, all I know is I am alright
When I'm alone, please just go, stop growing lies inside my mind

But it's not easy is it? Listen, it's smart to say farewell
We share the same vivid visions and this is harder on ourselves
But tell me, how can you leave me when you're a part of all my cells?
I need help, here I'm sittin' and just talking to myself

Chorus (singing):

We share this bruise
So why do you appear so cruel?
How are you gonna carry through?
If you aren't there for you?

And if it's scaring you
You gotta use that fear as fuel
You aren't gonna carry through
If you aren't there for you

Verse 2:

I've wandered this earth as blind, searching for signs
I used to think there's nothing worse having no purpose in life
But I was wrong cuz what is worse and yes I'm certain this time
Is to hide from your own purpose cuz the hurdles are high

To realize you run in circles, and work a disguise
You find so perfect, but it isn't and the person inside
Knows that it isn't and this person plays games versus your mind
I've felt pain, but I swear nothing can hurt me like I

I don't know why I'm such a burden and can't service my life
How it is a nurturing guy can turn and just murder my rhymes
You know my body's burning with pride as I finish a lyric
I feel terrific like, life doesn't have any limits

Then in a blink of an eye I begin to mimic this critic
And the next minute I'm picnicking with a sinister cynic
It's sickening, I'm listening and say I handle it okay
This belittling but fuck it man I stand in my own way

Chorus (singing):

We share this bruise
So why do you appear so cruel?
How are you gonna carry through?
If you aren't there for you?

And if it's scaring you
You gotta use that fear as fuel
You aren't gonna carry through
If you aren't there for you

Outro:

*Door slamming*
Get the fuck out of here
I don't wanna see you around ever

[svenbanan]

Snajdigt!

Jag brukar inte lyssna så mycket på hip-hop, men jag antar detta är nån form av rap?

Hur som helst så tyckte jag det var överlag en rätt så fyndig text!

[sumialic]

Ursprungligen postat av svenbanan

Snajdigt!

Jag brukar inte lyssna så mycket på hip-hop, men jag antar detta är nån form av rap?

Hur som helst så tyckte jag det var överlag en rätt så fyndig text!

Tack! Japp, hiphop.

Skriver alltid bara vad jag känner. Ibland fyndigt, ibland plain straight.

[Diomedea exulans]

Jag stödjer detta. Det är för lite kärlek till språket i vårt samhälle. Fan och hans moster ritar fantastiska teckningar, men man får leta med ljus och lykta för att hitta någon som ens bryr sig om att inte särskriva.

[sumialic]

Voices

Chorus:

I hear voices calling in my head they're shouting
Telling me these stories in my head I'm drowning
Bla, bla, bla there's no day without it
I've gone crazy and I doubt that there's a way around it

Verse 1:

Man I'm sick of this, this one's ridiculous
I have a flu where all I do is done meticulous
Well not true, let me rescript this bit
I have no clue how many times that I've rewritten it

But precise nitpicking that's not likely fitting
That definition won't suffice for the life I'm living
.............I have guides and they're unforgiving
I'm fighting off my Hydes but they run this building

This building I've built, the prison I'm in
A system full of bugs always itching my skin
Look.......................... I can't be satisfied
No matter what I cook I have an appetite

For more that's why I brush 'till my teeth fall out
That's why I'm crushing all my buttons 'till I scream out loud
....................My recipes have a piece of doubt
Cuz that's the way that it must taste to keep my demons proud

Chorus:

I hear voices calling in my head they're shouting
Telling me these stories in my head I'm drowning
Bla, bla, bla there's no day without it
I've gone crazy and I doubt that there's a way around it

Verse 2:

Sometimes I lie but here's an actual fact
I've had a about a million irrational acts
So when I'm chilling I relax in a bath full of ash
From the bridges that I've burnt in my laughable past

I've grown, but still exposed to smolder
Still a lot of dough is loaded in my broken toaster
I'm older though, opposed to homer
My show is still alive - the joke's not over

Yeah I smell funny honey it's my only odor
I repel, I don't troll, I'm a lonely ogre
Sure you can come for some homemade yogurt
With this tool though you're screwing with a roller coaster

It may be fun but it's a scary ride
Ride it too much and you'll be terrified
There's no such thing as a merry wife
“Cuz we're in charge and we don't ever wanna share this guy”

Chorus:

I hear voices calling in my head they're shouting
Telling me these stories in my head I'm drowning
Bla, bla, bla there's no day without it
I've gone crazy and I doubt that there's a way around it

Break:

There are things that I've said that I've said I wouldn't
With strings I am led to do things I shouldn't
They sing in my head, like enchanted my cupid
I'm moving the threads as I dance to their music

Verse 3:

So, this day at work while I was jotting words
It suddenly occurred that I got such an urge
I'm not a perv, but yo I need to touch some girls
With breasts or not, I don't give a fuck I'd jerk

Off to furry sheep, just lemme squeeze some butt
It's so absurd I dream, of all this freaky stuff
Like serving free drinks after I pee in cups
And running up in churches to kick Jesus nuts

And beating pups fuck this beef needs to stop
This isn't me it's just a piece of my demons' plot
Evil fucks you hear? “We're right next to you”
Don't I already have enough regrets produced?

“We bet you do, but you're a co-pilot”
“And this flight of ours is on a low mileage”
“So if we want you to be vile there is no niceness”
“You just shut the fuck up when you're told quiet”